Cool face of the river
Asked me for a kiss.
A poem simply needs to say enough to leave the reader thinking. Langston Hughes’ poem “Suicide’s Note,” has long since been my favorite poem. It’s subtle beauty allows the reader to grasp the meaning of the piece, and yet still ponder why such a dark experience can feel so peaceful.
When my students work through their poetry unit, I try to remind them that a poem doesn’t need to say more than what they mean. It’s so easy for poets – especially high school poets – to feel as if they need to include these obtuse metaphors, when in reality, the most honest, simply worded pieces, are the most engaging.
My poetry professor always used to tell us to use nickel and dime words, instead of quarter and dollar words. No one wants to use a dictionary to read through a poem. Keep them clean, and the reader will come back for more.
Do you have a favorite simple poem?