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Best of The Daily Prompt – June 4th

I Believe

by ssrae
6/4/13

I believe you
Every time you say
Words so carefully chosen
To keep my heart in play.
A hint at a future
Whispered in my ear
As you slip your arm ‘round me
And pull me near.
My face flushes,
My stupid heart soars.
It’s like I forget
All the times before.
Just like always
I fall into your trap,
Suddenly I am
Blind to your crap.
I have little faith
That you’ll come through,
And yet somehow
I still do
Because I think
You believe you too.

About Jamaal

Lover of words, liver of life, director of theatre, keeper of keys and grounds at Hogwarts. Twitter: @JamaalAllan

3 comments on “Best of The Daily Prompt – June 4th

  1. FlutePlayer
    June 5, 2013

    B/relief.

  2. betiyo
    June 5, 2013

    I thought mine was good. Then I read this one right after and I wanted to resign from writing. Great post!

    • J. Gabriel Allan
      June 5, 2013

      #thestruggleisreal
      challenge keeps us coming back
      we write cause we must

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