QOTD – What Makes for a Good Poem?

 

One of our Twitter followers, Jose Alba, asked us this question yesterday, and I wanted to post my response on the site. I work hard with my students to get them to understand that when it comes to poetry, they just really need to say what they want to say, and not hide behind obtuse metaphors.

When I got to Pacific University, I made the same mistake as many other young “poets,” and felt like I knew everything. I even had a “book” of poems called Artificial Grey, that I had typed up, and had spiral bound. I think I made 10 copies of it to give to my family and friends. I also thought it would be a great idea to give it to my poetry advisor, Professor Walls. I felt like he should know how fantastic I was. He gave me a faint smile (one that I give my high school students when they now hand me their books), and gladly accepted my work. Instead of just throwing it away, he went through each poem in the book – I think there were close to 200 – and edited them all.

He never gave me any guff about it, and instead, worked hard to let me see exactly what I needed to do in order to better my writing. I had a class with Professor Walls every semester of college, and I owe him quite a bit when it comes to helping me figure out my style of writing – with poetry, fiction, and editorials. It’s a professor like that who is needed for young poets – young anything really.

So, I ask you the same question we were asked:

What makes for a good poem?

“The Role of Art,” or “Do I Need More Therapy?”

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I want so badly to agree with the statement that “Art should comfort the disturbed and disturb the comfortable.” It seems like such a bold proclamation, and frankly, one that should be more than justifiable; however, I don’t know if that truly sums up the role of Art. Can’t Art simply comfort? Can’t Art make a person question, or discuss, or disgusted? Can’t Art make people notice their surroundings, their generation, their voice, their role in history? It doesn’t all have to be comfortable or disturbing. Right?

On the other hand, the word “disturb” can be taken in several different ways. It is the job of an artist to bring something to the attention of the viewer, or listener. It is the job of the artist make a person feel. So, maybe “disturbing the comfortable” is doing just that. Maybe the comfortable isn’t used to feeling or having to think about certain things outside their comfort-zone. If that’s the case, than this quote is incredibly accurate.

Does “comforting the disturbed” mean that a disturbed mind will be eased by something that others may find unsettling? Since Poetry is counted as art, does that mean that if I’m comforted by Browning’s “Porphyria’s Lover,” that I’m a bad person, or a disturbed person? If I find that poem to be one of the most honest love poems ever written, does that mean that I need more therapy than I already receive? I don’t feel like I want to murder anyone, let alone the woman who I love, but in that poem, his love is so unrequited, and so maligned that he feels it’s the only way they’ll ever be together. Now, Browning’s poem never alludes whether or not the strangulation of Porphyria is real, or simply in the lover’s head, but either way, when he wraps her hair around her throat, it’s dark, but immensely beautiful at the same time.

I love Jackson Pollock paintings, but they are violent in nature. The paint is splattered, and thrown, and while they may not seem like “art” to some, to me, much like the Browning poem, I find them beautiful. Is that wrong?

I love the smooth sounds of the Miles Davis Quintet era, but I also love the scattered, and dangerous Bitches Brew album. Is it comforting or disturbing? Right or wrong? Is there an answer to that question?

I agree that art is meant to force, or focus, or provide emotion for people, but I do not think you only get to options. I do not believe that art is there to provide comfort or disturbance. Art is there to promote thought, and whatever those thoughts are, as long as when a person thinks something, the artist has done their job.

The Daily Prompt – May 13th

Rules:

  1. Use the prompt in the way it’s intended (starting a sentence, the title of the piece, theme, etc)
  2. You may write in any format you see fit (fiction, non-fiction, poem, song, script, etc.)
  3. Post your piece of writing in the comments section of the website to be considered for the prizes given
  4. The winner of each daily prompt will be published on the site in “Best of The Daily Prompt” section.

The Daily Prompt:

Twitter has become a force in the world of social media, allowing celebrities to communicate with their fans, teenagers to leave short messages for everyone to see, and news sources to communicate with more immediacy than ever. It’s crazy to think that 140 characters – including spaces – can be the window to so much information. It can be a very difficult task to write the perfect “tweet.”

You must compose a short story in no more than 140 characters – including spaces.

It is best to open up your Twitter account to make sure that your tweet is the correct length. If you don’t have Twitter, you will need to rely on the character count function on whatever Word program you use.

Grammar Police – Oprah “Thanx” the Mothers

Grammar Police: Oprah Winfrey

I know it’s mother’s day, and I understand that Oprah was simply giving a “shout out” to all the mothers, but she had enough characters to not screw this one up so badly. Oprah needs to realize that with so many followers, many of whom attempt to model their lives after her words, she has to be careful about everything – including grammar. I don’t expect her to tweet back. I don’t actually think she writes her own tweet – which, frankly, makes this even worse. If she’s hired someone who has made her seem grammatically challenged, she should be ashamed of herself. She is an intelligent woman, and being as such, I expect better from her.

The Daily Prompt

We’re starting a new daily posting to go along with our Question of the Day. This one is The Daily Prompt. We know that the majority of our readers are writers, or at least dabble in the craft on occasion. We would love to see what you can do with the prompt each day.

Rules:

  1. Use the prompt in the way it’s intended (starting a sentence, the title of the piece, theme, etc)
  2. You may write in any format you see fit (fiction, non-fiction, poem, song, script, etc.)
  3. Post your piece of writing in the comments section of the website to be considered for the prizes given
  4. The winner of each daily prompt will be published on the site in “Best of The Daily Prompt” section

The Daily Prompt:

Start your piece with the line, “It took 7 hours, 48 minutes, and 16 seconds to…”

Reading Guides for the Dumb One in the Class

Before you start reading this, let’s get one thing perfectly straight, this post is not just about the students in your class, or the kids who say they don’t like reading; this post is very much for the teachers who stand in the front of the class, attempting to hide their sweat, and the fact that they are on the exact same page as their students – that they have never read the book that they are in the middle of teaching. It’s way more normal than people might think. Frankly, the first time teachers hand out an assignment, it’s not unusual for them to have never gone through that assignment, and be absolutely clueless as to how it’s supposed to go. Unless they were assigned certain texts in high school – and let’s face it, most teachers, myself included didn’t read everything they were assigned – they’ve never even considered opening the book that they’ve already placed on their classroom desks.

Last week, one of my students returned from a two weeks pre-arranged vacation. He was aware that we would be smack dab in the middle of reading Catcher in the Rye, and had been given all of the assignments ahead of time, as well as a reminder that the assignments, and the actual text of the book could be found on my classroom website. When he showed up in my classroom to ask what he had missed, it was more than obvious that he hadn’t followed through with any of the work we’d spoken about before his foray into the sun. We were just about to start chapter 20, and his response to me was, “Well, I read through the Sparks Notes last night, so I know everything that’s happened in the book.” Yikes. It took me a moment to figure out if he was serious. I mean, Sparks Notes were the hidden way to catch up when I was in high school, and not something that you openly bragged about having read. I told him that while I was glad he had a brief overview of the text, he had missed out on a book that might have taught him a little bit about his life. I mean, come on, even Holden Caulfield got A’s in English.

I did a lot of thinking about what my student had said, and it brought me back to my first couple years as a teacher, where, much like I mentioned earlier, I had not read all of the books that I was going to teach. I remember scrambling for “themes” and “meanings” and “symbols” and any possible “teachable moments” in the text just before the morning bell. That’s why, while I was not happy about what the student had done, I had to laugh it off. Frankly, the kids only mistake was telling me about his venture through the yellow and black.

There are some really good aspects to reading guides like Spark Notes, and sometimes it’s just the push we need to actually figure out what we are supposed to be gathering from certain texts.

For an example of what I’m talking about, RapGenius.com, has published a guide for The Great Gatsby. The movie is coming out this week, and a lot of American Literature classes are scrambling through it because teachers know that their students will soon be forking over their money to watch Leo DeCaprio portray the famed liar. It’s not the easiest book to understand, and it takes some time to truly grasp the depth of all the symbolism. This is a fantastic guide, and honestly, I’ll probably use a good deal of it when I teach this book next year. I’ve read Gatsby several times, but it doesn’t mean that I can’t use a refresher course.

Sometimes it’s not just the students who feel like the dumb ones in the class, and it’s okay to admit that, as a teacher, you don’t know everything.

F. Scott Fitzgerald – The Great Gatsby (Chapter I) Lyrics

QOTD: What the Hell Do We Do Here?

We’ve been at this whole website thing for a little over a week now, and we’ve amassed over 500 followers. That’s incredible. This little thing that started as a classroom project, has turned into three old college friends who have finally decided that they were ready to give their all to this mess called writing. We want to inspire people to write, to read, to think, and to talk to each other about what they are writing, reading, and thinking. But, how the hell do we do that?

We think our posts have been pretty good, and it seems like enough of you have found something to enjoy on the site so far, but we’re still trying to find our groove, and figure out the exact direction of The Poetry Question.

We truly need your help with today’s question:

What the hell do we do here? What would you like to see on this site?

Building Your Own Quill Pen

A Twitter follower of mine, RXheadz ( @AZeekiel ) made an offhand comment about writing with a Quill. It got me to wondering if a person could even find a quill pen anymore. While there seem to be several options for them around the internet, I discovered a site that walks you through how to build your own.

I’m not the most handy person, but I might give this a try. If you choose to make your own, please post a photo so we can all take a look!

Click HERE for the link to build your own!

To Find Out What People Are Saying?

While I will definitely post some of the bigger names, or better responses, the majority will be found on the twitter feed (the running feed, and link is on the right hand side of this page). A lot of the future posts on this blog will be essays, questions, writing prompts, student work, or musings about the world of poetry. Do yourself a favor and subscribe to both this page, and the twitter feed. There will be a Facebook page coming, but it’s currently being built.